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This is a really nice dark piece (as contradictory as that sounds
You've done a great job with this overall but I have two suggestions:
-First, the whole scene has uniform lighting and it looks great! The only thing that stands out is the woman n the swing - she doesn't seem to have a shadow.
-Second, the sky looks really good and totally suits the scene and lighting, but on the right side where it touches the horizon it seems to cut off too quickly - try to add some fog or smaller, low-lying clouds neat the horizon to make the sky look farther away and more natural.
Otherwise great work!!
Dan
The sky though is intended to look that way.
thankyou sweety for the comment
Oh.